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A-Simple-Facility by karlarei2003 A-Simple-Facility by karlarei2003
Now a Rainbow's tale isn't quite as nice
As the story we knew of sugar and spice

But a rainbow's easy once you get to know it
With the help of the magic of the Pegasus device

Let's delve deeper into rainbow philosophy
Far beyond that of Cloudsdale's mythology

It's easy to misjudge that floating city
With it's alluring decor and social psychology

But with all great things comes a great responsibility
That of Cloudsdale's being weather stability

How, you ask, are they up to the task
To which the answer is in a simple facility...


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~Based on a story written by Aurora Dawn~

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WARNING:


The story is NSFW! (Not Safe For Work)


This is a GrimDark and you should never ever read it.

Here it is: Rainbow Factory
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:iconiii-xaeo-iii:
III-Xaeo-III Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New member
Wow... just... wow!
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:iconkarlarei2003:
karlarei2003 Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much!
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CurtisKaiju Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Student General Artist
Two hundred years of industrial progress, standing on the pinnacle of western civilization...
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MetalBladePegasus Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
I like that monumental, industrial touch you gave to it. It really should be the first thing the failures see when they jump out of the cart.
Spectra cascading down the walls, giving this dark facility some living colours...literally.
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idislikecake Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*Reads story*

NAW, DON'T DO THAT, HONEY THAT'S NASTY!
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EnkerZan Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
Whatever happened to the Tumblr? It just kind of... Stopped...
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piepiepinkype Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is wicked awesome.
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Fiji-Firefox Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student General Artist
amazing!
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:iconkarlarei2003:
karlarei2003 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
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Terra-Nova1125 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014
wow this looks so coool
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:iconkarlarei2003:
karlarei2003 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconterra-nova1125:
Terra-Nova1125 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014
;D
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sombersunshine Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Student General Artist
i'm scared but really interested
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:iconkarlarei2003:
karlarei2003 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Also, thank you! <3
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sombersunshine Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student General Artist
shp bby
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:iconkarlarei2003:
karlarei2003 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The gore is only for a few moments, but it's pretty substantial.

I don't know, though.  if "Story of the Blanks" bothered you...

Xp
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sombersunshine Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student General Artist
IT'S ONLY BECAUSE.........IDK
i'mma do it
i can handle mlp stuff
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RainbowStr8ghtJacket Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
O_______O how have I never read this story
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:iconkarlarei2003:
karlarei2003 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
There's also a sequel called, "The Pegasus Device".

It should be in her stories list.
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RainbowStr8ghtJacket Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
will read
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